marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,
marycatelli
marycatelli

point of view

outlining the story. zipping back and forth between points of view, weaving together that of the villainesses and the heroines and the supporting characters. . . .

Except that I notice that every scene that has the main heroine tends to be from her point of view. Given the the heroines come together fairly soon, that changes the whole structure.

I shall have to ponder what the others are thinking. How the events are important to them. How they are shaped by them.

I suppose that means I need to define character development.
Tags: character arc, orchestrating characters, point of view
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