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Beyond the Clouds 2

Beyond the Clouds 2 by Nicke

The continued adventures of Theo and Mia.

He not only persuades the old man in the forest to give him a treatment for Mia but learns why it happened. Alas, they will have to find a magician who can teach her control for her to escape the peril. It involves being scolded for where they camp, Mia's fear that Theo will be injured, a pass, a fortune teller who finds lost things, and more.

Tags: fiction reviews: steampunk, graphic novel/manga
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