G. K. Chesterton
problems
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'tis the voice of a child
One complication of using a child as the point of view character is keeping not just the observations within the child's power to make, but the…
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down the years
Ah, the bildungsroman! I know the years ahead. I know many events that will happen in them. I even know that some will happen before others! It's…
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so that's the problem
figuring out the weakness of the opening: it's two scenes, and the first is mostly info-dumping. It should start in the forest, talking about…
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