marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,

the magnetic attraction of the old

A scene's got to go. It was badly written and I decided to completely rework the approach.

I poked at it a bit this evening. This was unwise. It had a certain magnetic attraction of keeping as much as I could. . . .

Perhaps I'll kill tomorrow, in cold blood.
Tags: revision

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