marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,

out of the military

So the heroine -- who has slogged into a military front and thrown her weight around with her magic -- now has some intelligence of vital importance.

How to keep the story going without her getting into strategy because she has magic to study --

hmmm --

Fortunately, there's someone she could talk to, and have him talk to the generals and stuff. She can stay focused.

There's always a juggling act.
Tags: discovery, plotting, world-building: magic (technique), world-building: schools

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