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Discoveries

 So what does she know, and when does she know it?

She is going to learn the thing was deliberately altered, because that sends her down a rabbit hole, and gives her a clue for the true solution.   But whether to learn who and why and when -- except that, given where she found it, long ago.

Meanwhile, various people are learning enough to be problems.   That will keep the conflict rising. 
Tags: conflict, discovery, fictional history, orchestrating characters
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