marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,
marycatelli
marycatelli

revision joys

Opening the story for the next revision

Wondering how I missed not only smoothing the transition to noticing the king, but that noticing the king is when most of the info-dumping fits in most neatly

Everything from "the king's brother is much younger than the king himself" to "the king's daughter is Sleeping Beauty, and he's rather begrudging of his niece."

sigh
Tags: beginnings, exposition, fairy tales (retelling), families: other, families: siblings
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