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Of bees and rivers

Much pondering of changing from falling into the river to being stung by a bee.

Much writing of it.

And then a character fell into the river anyway. A different character, a minor one, but still --

Slithered in a reference to another fairy tale for fun.  One with bees.

Tags: fairy tales in stories, revision
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