Niven's Fifth Law
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dealing with the witch
ding-dong the witch is dead -- The first one at any rate. I comment on her body first, but then I elaborate on the breaking of her spells.…
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weaving another thread
Oh, my. This story bursts past in outlines in New and Unusual Ways. The entire -- long -- episode where she gets taken on a journey and shown a lot…
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the adult problem in a scene
Most of a work in progress solves the adult problem by having the narrator face age-appropriate problems. Only when she gets to be an adult does she…
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