marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,

how I ramble into stories

I continually run across people who think that if you outline, you are rationally thinking your stories through.  It amazes me.

What I do when I have a story idea is write it down.  On scratch paper.

If I don't have an opening, I start a page just to list all the stuff that seems to go together but I haven't gotten an outline for yet (or have not gotten far enough on the outline).  If  I do have an opening, it's time to start the outline.  The top half of the first page is the character list.  In which I put down the names (or --, ---, etc. if I don't have names) and any significant details that don't naturally flow into the outline.  Like physical appearance, character, job, relations to other characters.  (And if the story gets long, it gets crowded.)

And then I start the outline itself.  Your English teacher would not approve.  I list the events as they happen.  I number them so that I can go back and put in 12.5 when I realize that something is missing between 12 and 13.  (Trying to write down events so that they will not be broken up is an art in itself.  I don't always recognize it.)

I do it all in gel pen.  In a particular color, specific to the story.   And if I don't know which color well enough, I don't know the story well enough to outline it.  'cause I've got to know if a new, bright idea feels right to fit into this story.  

And then the outline starts to grow.  Sometimes I have a good idea where it is headed.  (which is why I need a page to list all that stuff that doesn't have a place in the outline yet.)  Sometimes I have to inch along and let it sit on the backburner.  Sometimes I have to have a man come through the door with a gun in hand -- metaphorically, which is why I have to know the story, because I have to know what to literally have come through the door.

And sometimes -- sigh.  I am just about to finish an outline.  I realized where it was going when I realized that a certain character would have to go.  Now I think I have to sit down and totally overhaul the outline, because I have to make sure that everything she did in the first gets done.  Such is the fun of plotting.
Tags: inspiration, outlining, writing technique

  • ah parents

    Revising along. Hit a passage where the heroine remembers, with some resentment, how her parents had forced her to submit to an unjust demand from…

  • discoveries

    It's a lot easier to revise out of order than to write out of order. It does lead to interesting discoveries, like you put an explanation that the…

  • Of bees and rivers

    Much pondering of changing from falling into the river to being stung by a bee. Much writing of it. And then a character fell into the river…

  • Post a new comment


    Anonymous comments are disabled in this journal

    default userpic

    Your reply will be screened

    Your IP address will be recorded