William Shakespeare
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William Shakespeare
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dealing with the witch
ding-dong the witch is dead -- The first one at any rate. I comment on her body first, but then I elaborate on the breaking of her spells.…
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so that's the problem
figuring out the weakness of the opening: it's two scenes, and the first is mostly info-dumping. It should start in the forest, talking about…
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encounters
It's all very well to plan out how the heroine and the others escape from the evil and violent monsters. You still have to get them to meet in the…
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