marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,

another Mary Sue test

Right here.

A fun form of vacuuming the cat, since my characters tend to range from "Not a Mary Sue at all, maybe you need to spice it up a little" to "borderline Mary Sue" without my actually being more sentimental about some than others.

Tags: characterization, mary sue, websites

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