marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,


Let there be light. . . .

the students are wandering about, and I am describing furniture and things, and sometimes windows.  On the other hand, it's a gray day, and I do not mention lamps. . . so where is the light coming from?

Fortunately, I suppose, I have one of them study it, but that only removes the info-dumping issue.

Don't want the whitewash to glow.  But I may blame it somehow.  0:)
Tags: setting (scene), world-building: magic (technique)

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