marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,
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vignette

This week's prompt is:

Flag

Anyone can join, with a 50-word vignette in the comments.

My venture:

He looked at the kids. For a moment, he thought of telling them to go through the records, and flag anything that looked odd. But they would have no idea what was odd, or normal.

He sighed. "Get some sleep," he told them. "We may need you to be alert."
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