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vignette

This week's prompt is:
Coil

Anyone can join, with a 50-word vignette in the comments.

My venture:
The mist from the waters rose up, sank down, coiled around.

Acted like mist, in fact.

Except for the colored lights playing through the coils, tinting them red and blue and green and gold, he would not have given it a second glance. Less than if there were no mist.
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