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vignette

This week's prompt is:
raise

Anyone can join, with a 50-word vignette in the comments.

My venture:
"We should get the kids out before we raise the field," said John.

"So we should," said Rosa. "Which means it should be set up to let two people do it."

Silence fell.

Her voice brittle, Rosa said, "I think they wanted to ensure that all four conspirators were implicated."
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