marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,
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vignette

This week's prompt is:
crush

Anyone can join, with a 50-word vignette in the comments.

My venture:

His footsteps echoed. And whether slowly or quickly, the sound reverberated oddly. He had never been here before without the crush of a crowd. It changed the place utterly. He had an insane impulse to go back and check the door.

They would ask him why he took so long.
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