marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,
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vignette

This week's prompt is:

apathetic

Anyone can join, with a 50-word vignette in the comments. Your vignette does not have to include the prompt term.

My effort:

He wondered how many more rooms they had to check. He wondered how long he would care.

Tristan and Talia were checking them off on the map, and earnest in conversation. He wondered how long they would be that bright-eyed and eager.

He sighed. Perhaps he already did not care.
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