marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,
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vignette

This week's prompt is:
Slip
Anyone can join, with a 50-word vignette in the comments. Your vignette does not have to include the prompt term.

My effort:


Don't slip.

Don't slip.

He inched onward, over the wet floor, with the command reiterating itself to him without ceasing, and every time reminding him of the possibility. Tristan's tongue touched his lip. If he slipped, the others might not be able to rescue him. Or only at a price.
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