marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,
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vignette

This week's prompt is:
muddle
Anyone can join, with a 50-word vignette in the comments. Your vignette does not have to include the prompt term.

My effort:

She looked at her notes. Even with only the four of them, it was so important not to let them get into a muddle. They had nowhere else for the knowledge they had gleaned so painfully, the conclusions they had drawn, or even the wild guesses that might pan out.
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