marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,
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vignette

This week's prompt is:

quick

Anyone can join, with a 50-word vignette in the comments. Your vignette does not have to include the prompt term.

My effort:

Talia wondered how quickly it had happened. None of them would have noticed if it had taken minutes or perhaps even hours, as long as it had done thought dramatic enough to reach the outer rim. But it could have been quick, sweeping through the station as fast as light.
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