marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,

words on the way

Two knights do not explain to the lady fair what is going on along the way, as they take her to a place of safety.

The lady fair and modern, who's just been told she's not going back to her cubile and her job working at internal marketing.  Though, to be sure, she does have evidence that such a return would be dangerous.

She's attentive, andshe does notice that they are watching the surroundings, but I do not think it enough explaination, especially since they said they would tell her.  If there's some magical reason to not tell her on the way. . . .

Finella would say so.  Really for a character who just showed up to shut things along, she's remarkably helpful.
Tags: dialog, discovery, orchestrating characters, travel

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