marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,
marycatelli
marycatelli

firebirds

 I mentioned, in the first paragraphs, that there were unicorns and firebirds in the forest.  Some local color to add clues about magic.  Above and beyond the fact that the woods involved are always in dusk. . . you can't be too careful in cluing the readers in.

A unicorn has appeared.  Twice.  In plot significant ways.

I wonder if a firebird will as well.
Tags: local color, plot twist, setting (whole story), world-building: enchantment
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