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on the eclipse
https://twitter.com/aerognome/status/899687295762051072
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'tis the voice of a child
One complication of using a child as the point of view character is keeping not just the observations within the child's power to make, but the…
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for the birds
Wading through the story, throwing in birds here and there. Enough to ensure that the reader knows that there are always birds, often of strange and…
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so that's the problem
figuring out the weakness of the opening: it's two scenes, and the first is mostly info-dumping. It should start in the forest, talking about…
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