marycatelli (marycatelli) wrote,

time and the story

Start to outline with the flashback structure. Realize it probably can be in linear time.

Ah, the things you learn.

It was the character introduced to be spiteful that provided enough bridging conflict to get to her discoveries, and the central conflict. At least of the first third. It will rise past that.

Wondering how minor the current-day villains are. The big problem is from peolple long dead, certainly.
Tags: conflict, story structure, story time

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